Archive For February 25, 2016

Be Direct with Message

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Be Direct with Message

All writing is storytelling, whether it’s a quick email or a memo or a longer report. How we open a story is critical to engaging the reader because we compete for the reader’s limited time. Journalists are taught to think in terms of the 5 Ws and an H. Who, What, When, Where, Why and…

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Be Careful with Questions

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Be Careful with Questions

The advertisement for the hospital began with the prominent headline: Is It Possible to Transform the Way Emergency Care is Delivered? The first two sentences of the narrative copy asked: What if emergency care were designed around you? What if all the different steps typically encountered in the emergency department could be streamlined? Then the…

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Pruning Dead Wood

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Pruning Dead Wood

One of the most common problems in writing, or speaking, is the addition of unnecessary words to a primary thought. Think of the overall narrative as a well-rooted tree trunk with strong branches and offshoots shaping the essence of the tree. Sometimes we need to prune unruly sprouts to keep the tree healthy and balanced….

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Before Taking a Word Trip

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Before Taking a Word Trip

How to think about organizing the story is typically one of the most intimidating challenges we hear from writers. A good metaphor is to think about taking a car trip. We don’t just get in and drive aimlessly. Usually, we have a purpose around why we need to drive. And, we map out in our…

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